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©2009 `Helewidis
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Many asked for a black and white version, so here it is! :flirty:

In colours: [link]

:whisper: for info on the photo read the description of the coloured version...

I'm too lazy to copy-paste it! :paranoid:

Critiques


:iconbamsen:
First off. Wow (!) that seems like a lot of fun! And to me, that expression really seem to represent the whole event. Which is really what photojournalism is all about for me. Capturing the essence of a place, an event or a person in that one shot. The couple on the left and the girl smiling way out on the right are doing a lot to emphasize this as well which I like.

I'm a bit unsure about the blur though. I know it's more or less impossible to get every shot technically perfect. Especially when there's loads going on. Obviously like in this place. I can't help but to think that the shot would stand out more if it had been in focus. But then again the blur isn't totally destructive because of the whole frame being as busy as it is.

Oh and I like the B/W version more. Because it makes the people stand out a bit more from the background (especially the ones in the back there as I mentioned before).
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i like this one better then the coloured one. i dont knnow i jcst do. its awesome :)
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Eu participei na do Porto... Não sei se é a mesma ou não

mas foi muito curtido ^^

Boa foto ;)

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I am the sun on ripened grain
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I am not there. I do not die
:iconhelewidis:
não sei... esta fez parte das festividades pré-queima :D

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Eloísa Valdes,
Anthropologist by day, Deviant by night.

`Helewidis & ^estudio aka dA's Bonnie & Clyde
:iconhelewidis:
:bow:
thank you!

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Eloísa Valdes,
Anthropologist by day, Deviant by night.

`Helewidis & ^estudio aka dA's Bonnie & Clyde
:iconkasumichan2003:
I'm liking this version better, I think it's easier to focus on the girl than the other one.

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:iconhelewidis:
:thanks:
thank you, sweetie!

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Eloísa Valdes,
Anthropologist by day, Deviant by night.

`Helewidis & ^estudio aka dA's Bonnie & Clyde
:iconstamatisgr:
I must definitely suggest it for a DD :giggle:
It's wonderful! :clap:

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:iconamericananie:
Yesss!
Thank you ;P


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Por favor, tenme paciencia...:ohnoes:

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April 13
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Canon
Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
1/250 second
F/1.8
50 mm
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Mar 25, 2009, 6:34:28 PM

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